Thursday 15 May 2014


WALT: Show not tell our feeling in our

writing


As I hit the water, I froze into an iceberg (cold).

My body anchored to the ground and refused to move (tired)..

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 May 2014 at 09:54

    Wow! Did you know that the second one could be nervous as well?

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  2. Anonymous26 May 2014 at 10:03

    WOW! Kieran I like how you showed me not told me what you felt

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