IALT: I am learning to capture a moment in time when recounting a personal experience.
The Movie
I heard whispering all around us.
I heard endless giggling from in front and beside us.
I saw 3D movement popping out of the screen.
I saw faceless heads in the distant.
I felt the sweetness in my mouth.
I felt tiny bits of popcorn scattered over my legs.
I wonder if I’ll ever go back there again.
I wonder if poppa enjoyed the movie.
Wow Kieran,that is to good to be true.
ReplyDeleteNice job Kieran.I like all the adjectives and words
ReplyDeleteGood job Bro!!
WOW Kieran I like how you used awesome adjectives and descriptive words.I especially liked the sentence I saw 3d movement popping out of the screen.
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