Thursday 30 July 2015

My first try of a persuasive writing this year.

Make Holidays Longer

Don’t you love when you have lots of time to do
what you only want? Well I do. I strongly believe that the holidays should be 3 weeks long not 2. Here are some reasons below why I think the school holidays must be longer.  

School holidays must be longer so that families who want to travel out of New Zealand can. If you go somewhere far away and stay for a couple of day you will come back home and be tired.   



1 comment:

  1. A good start. Your introduction is clear and states the point of your reason for writing.

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