I am a year 5 student at David Street School in Morrinsville, New Zealand.
I really like how you explained why you like basketball, Kieran. It is really important to include this sort of detail for your audience so that they know why you like it so much. A great description!!
Hey Kieran I like your story about your self.By Max!
Cool Kieran I like Basketball too.Next time maybe instead of writing nine you could just do the number 9Jamie
I really like how you explained why you like basketball, Kieran. It is really important to include this sort of detail for your audience so that they know why you like it so much. A great description!!
ReplyDeleteHey Kieran I like your story about your self.
ReplyDeleteBy Max!
Cool Kieran I like Basketball too.
ReplyDeleteNext time maybe instead of writing nine you could just do the number 9
Jamie