Shadow

As I come across the sloppy, muddy bank I hear footsteps of someone that’s not me. I look down and all it is is my shadow. I start talking to it. It cried “YUCK how can you run through that mud it’s torture” I’m used to it. Now can you stop talking to me you’re so annoying . As the race goes by my shadow picks up speed and gets in front of me. That little egg  is beating me. I think I can catch up to him and run in front of him but he won’t let me. I’m getting annoyed at him and my luck just goes away. We get to the finish line. I sprint but he sprints faster. He comes 17th and I came 18th. That was my worst day ever.

        

What Is Temperature

Soccer Ball

Dear Mother

Soccer ball

Don’t you just love having a ball at your house when you want it don’t you? well I do. I strongly believe that I should get a soccer ball because i’m desperate and my ball is old.

Firstly I want a nike ball because my old ball is broken, rubbish and daunting to look at. Also get embarrassed when friends come over that not good. Also it is handy to have a ball around the house because you can play outside and not get stuck on technology.

Secondly I want a soccer ball so I can practice at home and get a lot better so I can get a lot of goals on the field. If I don’t get a soccer ball I’ll not be able to carry on with soccer and that will be a disaster please don't let that happen.

Lastly the bad things about the ball is that if I don’t get a new ball I will get stuck with my other bad ball NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!. The good thing about getting a ball are i’ll be getting better at soccer because I will practise and that is Amazing!!!!!!.

Now I hope that you agree with me about my new soccer ball. I will practise and keep playing soccer so please Mum.

Cross Country Goal

My goal for Cross Country:

1. To get a good score like 20th.
2. I want to challenge my self by trying not to walk.

The next day (Cross Country)

I completed the first goal to come in the 20th I came 17th.

I completed the second goal to I didn't walk at all. 

My goal for my next piece of persuasive writing

1. Use more of facts, exaggerating and questions for my next piece of persuasive writing.
2. I need to put more reason.
3. I need a conclusion.