Thursday 15 May 2014


WALT: Show not tell our feeling in our

writing


As I hit the water, I froze into an iceberg (cold).

My body anchored to the ground and refused to move (tired)..

Friday 9 May 2014

IALT: I am learning to capture a moment in time when recounting a personal experience.

The Movie


I heard whispering all around us.
I heard endless giggling from in front and beside us.
I saw 3D movement popping out of the screen.
I saw faceless heads in the distant.
I felt the sweetness in my mouth.
I felt tiny bits of popcorn  scattered over my legs.
I wonder if I’ll ever go back there again.

I wonder if poppa enjoyed the movie.

Wednesday 7 May 2014

Maths questions

187+537=

309-565=

321+889=